Thank you for your comments. I intentionally left the cliff-hanger ending because this story was just about sex. I wanted to talk about sex. It’s okay to have sex with the person you love or alternately, the person you are wildly attracted to in that first instance of meeting. There are umpteen degrees of loving. As an entry-point to erotica, sex is the bottom-line, with differing degrees of emotional involvement and attachment. (Love stories have their own trajectories, as you correctly noted).

Zarina, the protagonist of my stories is a thinking, feeling animal. She can be a horny beast, but she can also be tender and loving. I look forward to your thoughts on the next story that’s just been published. I think you may like the ending a bit more

I will keep on adding spice, as long as you keep on reading!

Safe sex to all

Sasha Bings

……MJ its my number after yours …

On serious note, I do agree with others who have questioned the inclusion of an erotic post but i enjoyed it a lot and it has indeed added some SPICE to it. And its sort of welcoming.

My suggestion would be to let this site grow in its content and space. And where we speak of emotions, follows the desire.
I really feel if the story this post had an ending with it, or some expression in the end, it would not have attracted such criticism.
Bings for you.

I think, Mithya does not seem to be offended by having sexual content on the site per se, but by how explicit it is? Also perhaps the idea that two people could simply act on their attraction so instantly.
Which, as Brooom said earlier, could encourage the idea that it is more about sex than love.
(whether two people acting purely on desire are filthy -is a matter of individual opinion)

Otherwise, as Sasha
says, i think we have all grown up wishing there were more lezzie stories and erotica around, so a move to include that on this site is welcome.

But stories can be in different formats :you can have something like “Love Story” by Erich Segal or “Bridge Across Forever” by Richard Bach or the “Mills and Boon” type or something as direct and purely sexual as the story on this link http://www.shorteroticstories.com/after-bar.php

What will gaysifamily choose?
Or all of them? But I think Broom’s next post has given that answer.

And as for what is gross and not, we all have our own definitions. And its not just sex, even the act of eating -when depicted in a certain way can come across as gross.

I am sorry to read this offends your sensibilities.. and that’s understandable.. different brushes, different strokes. But what really peeved me is your insinuation that this was done to increase traffic. That’s an unfair prop to use to prove your point.

Do you understand this or must I simplify this for your understanding. If Mithya is entitled to her opinion, am I not entitled to mine? Or am I expected to not voice it because it echoes with the majority? Broom & MJ have been hardly “getting back”. So please don’t make this case of ganging up. If anything, I am willing to admit, I may be slightly abrasive. But Mithya’s accusation that the editors compromised on quality for traffic deserved to be responded to. If you find it filthy, that’s your right and no one is taking that away from you. No one accused anyone of being conservative or a prude. So I wonder why you must insist you aren’t one.. I am also trying to demystify why you would continue to read a post that contained a warning of “sexual content”. Did you find it filthy only because there was no emotional attachment?

No one made this personal. But you are now. I am neither cool nor happening and don’t aspire to be, either. I reiterate what I said earlier. This place is very inclusive of EVERYONE. Gay, Not so gay, Prehistoric, Cool, Old fashioned, Modern, all of ‘em. If you like to read a more sanitised and polite response to what you’ve written, you can read Broom’s latest post http://gaysifamily.com/2009/07/04/lets-talk-about-sex-baby/

Well my thinking is not pre-historic and neither is it conservative. I;ve read porn..seen porn..I’ve lived outside India all my life but I still clearly relate to where Mithya view point comes from.

Mithya- This world is now a place for the so called “cool” and “happening” people..out of box thinking you see. Im sure people like you who still hold on to fairy tale ideas of love and romance for sure will feel a misfit and each one will continue to make you feel so.

I don’t think Gaysi has ever boxed itself into any one category.

For me a physical connection between two is innocent and a beautiful.

A physical connection doesn’t turn ugly or devious if it should happen without emotional attachment. If it makes two needy souls happy, then why shouldn’t it be beautiful?

It seems the intent of this post was to maximize search traffic?

If you have been a regular reader of Gaysi, it is truly tragic that you should think Broom would give into the lure of search optimization over quality. I know I am taking a huge leap by saying “We” here and asserting ownership but here goes.. We, at Gaysi, hope that the readers understand Gaysi is a place for everyone. Straight people, Gay people, even the undecided. I am sorry to read this offends your sensibilities.. and that’s understandable.. different brushes, different strokes. But what really peeved me is your insinuation that this was done to increase traffic. That’s an unfair prop to use to prove your point.

I for one, am a very sexual person. I love reading about it, watching it (movies, tele, etc) and hell yeah…doing it. So when Sasha came up with the idea of lezzie-erotica for Gaysi…I jumped on the opportunity without a second thought. Finally stories we can relate to – as in, in the Indian context.

As for being subtle – but why? We are gifted with wild/wicked/crazy/spunky imagination…so better make use of it no? Who knows tomorrow we may start our very own desi L word series. With Katrina Kaif as one of the leads…and if not her, there is always Lisa Ray.