Linger

* Note : Contains Explicit Sexual Content

All night the rain was drumming on the crinkled tin roof. There was no lightning, no thunder; just a steady flow of raindrops to celebrate the departure of spring.

The sound of drops falling on a tin roof is unique in a way that it lets you stay awake yet it doesn’t keep you from sleeping. It’s a silent sound that you can hear. The steady drift of water on my emotions and feelings.

I always associate her with rain water. She has that effect on me. Her earthy sensuality and how deeply she penetrates my senses & thoughts almost feels like a crazy tide hitting the shore in the night rain. The sound of the falling drop carried a note which guided me to another tender spot on her. Its music brought out that familiar ripple, throb & sigh. Her arresting smile made me more restless and warm with desire. She never puts a scent in the night and yet when I run my fingers over her body and then bring them to my face, I am touched by the most delicate of aromas. The conversation continued between my hands and her body all night long.

The night was spent in love; in her. And early in the morning when the rain had stopped and the romantic notion dispelled by the alarm, I felt sleepy. And her subtle fragrance still lingered on me, making me melt further in her memories.

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  1. Sammy

    Beautiful!

  2. MJ

    Funny how we associate moments, songs, seasons, etc etc with that special someone. In happy times & especially sad times.

    Love I tell you…is one twisted emotion. :D

    Good stuff Ms. Chicklet

  3. deepseas

    Truly good stuff! Beautiful..

  4. deepseas

    So romantic and tender..you envelope us in the warmth of that emotion with your writing.. look forward to more stuff..

  5. Priyanka

    Really beautiful. Looking forward to more from you Chicklet. Kinky name BTW. ;)

  6. Chicklet

    beauty is always in the eyes of the beholder.
    @sammy thank you!
    @MJ Love is intriguing .. and such association allows us to relive. sometimes history. other times just a story!
    @deepseas u are forever welcome in my fold.
    @Priyanka :) thank You. kinky ?? ah! and i thought it just carried a flavor of mint. She gave it to me.

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